Poems

ill write anther 1 2 even though i dont want 2

nice poem. it does me good to see how my topic grown. i have a poem as well to share.

this is my new poem trouble sleepin

it late and im feeling so tired,
havin trouble sleepin,
this constant compromise,
between thinkin and breathin,
could it be im sufferin because i never give in,
wont say that im falling in love,
tell me i dont seem myself,
couldn't i blame somthin else,
just dont say im falling in love,
some kind of therapy is all i need,
please believe me,
some instant remedy that can cure me completely,
could it be im suffering because i never give in,
wont say that im falling in love,
tell me i dont seem myself,
couldn't i blame somthin else,
just dont say im fallin in love,
cause i been there before,
and it not enough,
so nobody say it,
dont even say it,
i got my,
eyes shut,
wont look,
oooh,
no im not in love,
could it be im suffering because i never give in,
wont say that im falling in love,
tell me i dont seem myself,
couldn't i blame somthin else,
just dont say im fallin in love.

tell me what yall think of it.

wow man i rally like this one even the way the lines are shaped flow nicely like waves waves of emotion you really done well on this one faye i really like it alot its good and i can guess who was the inspiration

nice poem faye

Yeah baby yo poem is real nice and it flows very nicely. i thank u 4 ya inspiration now read mine. To b Continued

Can U See Through My Barricade



No one can see that I'm in perrel.
This can't be true don't say that!!!
I could never be that tell the truth man.
It's not me; I'm not that type of person.
Stop saying that I'm that because I'm not that.
Stop it man u gotta be lyin about that.
We never do that were males remember.
We just let the world revolve around us.
Stop saying that; I'm not that so stop please.
Ya'll can keep thinkin that but it'sno true.
Skip it I give in could it be that though.
I thought this couldn't happen to me though.
I don't think it's happening to me.
I think? I think? I think? I think?
I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!

woooow good job jt i like it

you and faye are both the stars of this topic evil is and up and coming star too romeo and juliet l good going you also payed attention to form of the poem. one understands the other and responds to their feelings, but let it be a happy endin and not a repeat of shakespears session.

Can U Stand The Rain


It's pouring out, and it's runing fast. D
Looking at it all, and it has a sparkle of its own. I
Can U Stand The Rain? D
While I'm goin in and out her body. U
the ecstacybuilds up. S
Is she almost their? T
Can U Stand The Rain? A
The strokes sre gental,but fill her up. N
Can U Stand The Rain? D
It can happen at any moment. T
Can U Stand The Rain? H
She's gonna blow. E
Can U Stand The rain? R
She just exploded. A
Now the rain dies down. I
Ya'll are drenched in ya'll own sweat. N
I got a question to ask. ?

beutyful

lol man thats very creative dude lol i neva thought you had it in you to write like that good job man you should save that one for private matters though jking

Till It Happens To You

i know,
what i said,
was heat of,
the moment,
there's alittle truth in between the words we spoken,
and,
its a little late now to fix a heart thats broken,
please dont ask me where im goin,
cause i dont know,
no i dont know,
anymore,
it use to feel like heaven,
it use to feel like may,
i used to hear those violins playing heart strings like a symphony,
now they're gone away,
nobody wants to face the truth,
but you wont believe what love can do,
until it happens to you,
went to,
the old flat,
guess i was trying turn the clock back,
but how come that nothin feels the same now that im with you?,
we used to stay up all night in the kitchen when our love was new,
oooo love,
am i a fool to believe in you?,
cause i dont know,
no i dont know,
anymore,
it used to feel like heaven,
it use to feel like may,
i used to hear those violins playing heart strings like a symphony,
now they're gone away,
cause nobody wants to face that truth,
until their heart is broken,
dont you tell them what you think to do,
till they get over,
you can only learn things from experience,
when you get older,
just wish someone would've told me.

lol shosh!!!!!! its cool

i wnt to se jts poem

you all be writing up a storm man i c this one is aimed towards life learning and possibly experiences in the past ,if i am wrong correct me, it shows waht it means to grow older and that the experience of others are quite important in preparation for these trails like i said you and [u]and shadow have a nack for this you should show as many ppl as you can who knows waht might happen.

your past and teachings could touch another person's pain and spear dem the griff that causes so much pain and tell of the glory that happens, while it rains rain.

F.A.Y.E How She Takes My Breath Away

I here those sounds,
but there makin me tingle,
ma heart without u,
jus thinkin it makes me tremble,
jus like that instrument thats called a symbol,
it brings rings to ma ears,
but all i need is u here and im protected,
from the things we do we cant speak of,
for that it would blow others minds,
tell watcha think of the way ma words fuse,
and freeze people in their tracks while the cold chill hits their spine,
this is the disease i carry its called love,
and theirs no cure for me everybody,
i come and wont never go away,
it'll be a supernova of everything i stand for,
just call me mercury because i bring the heat in bed,
but I put a cold front of pluto in the mix to make u feel fantastic,
it might take time but youll be used to it in due time,
jus how the month we share has the same sign,
and when get done fornicating we say stop at the same time,
and when we hold hands its like were binded by a strong twine,
and when i look at your pussy it has a clean shine,
we have come together and make thick bind,
but you should consider me a true crime,
because in the bed i break the laws of physics,
just call me an alchemist,
i give and i take from the soul of what you give to me,
let me kno if the state your in is safe to too be in,
this is different isnt it plain too see,
we all nighters all day can since that,
u go to sleep on your stomach i mean face flat,
wehen u dream its about each other so you up on your back,
now i wish u shouldve told me this before i went in,
that i would bust in 20 seconds exact because i kno because i just went it.

damn man lol you and faye need to get together and write one like diologe
ex.
faye:(says her line)
(and)
jt:(you respond)

get a publisher you two you spilling gold and you don't even know it

so take a risk with this cause it's ether a hit or a miss, but one thing be sure jt fayes gonna love diss and you might get kissed

lol thanks for the idea. we'll think about it.

well thnx 4 that new idea well sell millions but were already famous u kno we beautifull together and hatas keep omn haten so we doin sumthin right at least

a haku

yeah when she cheated on me,
she though it was a giant but she got the gnome,
she wanted the ten footer so she came back home

lol nice.

nah i just playing around