Poems

show you creative side and speak from the mind and heart. here is one of mine. its named 'Seasons Change'.


Maybe you been pourin',
everything,
into this from a state of bliss,
it turns to agony,
you cant predict this,
when it comes to it,
you cant hide from it but do you surrender,
anything,
dont you know that,
that patience is a virtue? yes it is,
and life is a waiting game,
dont you know that?
peace must be nurtured,
and all the money in the would can buy you nothin let me tell you that,
all these things happen,
all these things happen,
for a reason,
dont you go and throw it all away you'll get yours
when the seasons change,
when they change,
hurts me to see you feel this way but it wont be always,
dont you know everything's,
got to change?
feels like all your hope is gone you cant carry on,
but there's nothin wrong,
you dont have to pretend with me,
dont you know that,
that patience is a virtue?
yes it is,
and life is a waiting game,
dont you know that?
peace must be nurtured,
and all the money in the world can buy you nothing let me tell you that,
all these things happen,
all these things happen,
for a reason,
so dont you go and throw it all away you'll get yours,
when the seasons change,
when they change.

plz tell me what you think of it. this is a first of many. thank you.

uhhh...ok

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im confused

since when did u log on ken

as i said before i dig the poem now that its in a whole and not in lines so i can read it striaght without stopping i get it more around the middle part it even brought a smile to my face i like the poem faye if i didn't know i would say someone famous wrote it keep it up

thank you i have another one but i want to know what bunz and shadow think of the first one. and post the second.

watever man,i bet u didnt even really understand that crap JUST A FAKE hmm.....

dude when you older you will understand bak at home i had to study poems for cxc so yeah i understand them but i am a bit rusty thats way i don't tell you all waht i get from it cause you might get someting different but as you get older you learn to analysis things so jo just be patient you might get it someday

this is my second poem. its called 'enchantment'

i wait for you,
i dont know why,
all i know,
is i cant hide,
at this temperature,
you could take over my mind,
like gossamer,
you softly touch,
he draws me in,
im powerless,
he possesses,
an enchantment,
tell me,
im forgiven,
he calls dont know how i fell under his spell,
lately,
i've been driven,
he smiles,
an enchantment,
i wait for you,
im mesmerised,
this love is like a potion in disguise,
i'd tightrope walk,
with a blindfold on my eyes,
i cant escape,
or so it seems,
i'd run away,
he's in my dreams,
he possesses,
an enchantment,
tell me,
i'm forgiven,
he calls dont know i fell under his spell
lately,
i've been driven,
he smiles,
an enchantment,
its the kind of sleepwalk never ends,
a type of loan with no dividends,
its a parlour game where you givin' chase,
guess it could be called an acquired taste,
i know,
he knows,
he calls,
i go,
i know,
this could be an enchantment,
why dont you tell me,
im forgiven?
he calls dont know i fell under his spell,
i'm forgiven,
lately,
i've been driven,
he smiles and i give in,
an enchantment.

please tell me what your think.

yeah i like this one its really good and it flows nicly from one line to the next i like it its real easy to catch the flow of it the others should like this one too

who the fuck is this guy shes talkin bout i bet hes weak like this gay poem #2 i bet hes weak in sfo to.

hmmm evil if this is gay and she is talking about a girl and guy together then wat is straight to you the relationship of man and woman is a beautiful thing remember dat

Hey nice poems!

I HAVE A POEM CALLED LIFE 2 HEAVEN ITS A LOVE POEM OF COURSE BUT JUS LISTEN AND READ CARREFULLY K

u hold the key to my heart,
that fills me up with joy,
Your fine and ma heart cant take it,
it's like a heart attack of your body,
and your appearance so fine and lovely,
just beautiful,ugive me a sparkle to my eyes,
and enlighten my day, to open my eyes and keep me awake,
even on dates your mind is up for anything,
so peaceful, gleaming, and enchanting to me,
do let us be together in night and day to our lives run,
and the sand is all gone our souls floar into the night departing sky,
and then shine in the heavens as we reunite as we get another chance together again, for eternity.

its beautiful. i like it. its good enough to touch someones soul. evil, not to be rude. but if you dont understand the poem then let us know we'll explan it. theres no reason to get mad at other ppl and talk junk about there poem. cuz all that proves is how childish you are. so grow up and plz just ask questions if you dont understand my poems.

hmm i guess your right faye that ui shouldnt tlk shit bout peoples poems but that dosnt make me childish and plus i am a child

lol your so nasty. but i like it. i really do.

[b]AWSOME

we all must be there still and quite,
in a world where racket is the qier still
we stood there waiting but,
the worlds the kept on facing,
the gunz they all be a blazing,
when will they understand that it is all about the hand,
the hand that reached to save a soul,
they help they rich but more so the poor,
still the wars, they kept on fighting and so the world will keep on dieing

this is the truth about our worth,
all things human are mostly CURSED

i love it,its good i knew you could do it.

THIS MA NEW POEM

the is full of surprises,but the world is full of tormoil 2
the sunlight of happiness shines on u then the darkness always follows it
in this world u cant b happy without bein in the dark path.
u think its not there but it is.
u can b happy cuz of the world but b mad cuz of ur girl
u hate bein heartbroken so now ur choken on ya heart
u hate all the things that make u sad but the bad keeps comin
now your almost at the edge of the bridge
youve been tainted by the devils power u now have no heart and then when ur bout to jump
u take one more look at the world but then u look down at the water and jump
but when ur gone your family suffers cuz u messed up
but it only lasts 4 a while after youve died
then they move on like u were never here in the world
so tell me is it worth jumpin the bridge if ur not bein remembered???? u jus commited SUICIDE thats all and no one cares do they??? pressuring ppl can hurt in the long run ppl i kno r bout ready to jump that bridge

wow its like im reading my life, i understand it fully. and i love your poem.

i have another one coming soon u gotta get those poems written yall cuz ill leave yall in this too if u dont

What an age of expectation and glee
You are age your encore is mere wishes
Oh!What later morning you really are
You are complete but yet,so incomplete.
Are you not matured immaturity?
You're under positive observation
'Cause you are not intrinsically bad
Though you are a-times unpredictable.
You possess two-some acts of either or.
Age,full of synonyms and antonyms
You are writing slate of development
Developers have onerous task on hand
To infuse in you, the needed growth needs
It is very relevant to good life.
Teenagers need many good role models
Who all exemplify hard-work as a
Way of life with absolute truthfulness.
Should I not add virtues of wisdom and
Forthrightness the teenagers all must have
The virtues are foundational to life.

good to see the poem thing catching on i guess i might write another one